From b48ea4a1a69ffe2d23e78c44c4a2f4067370f449 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Turner <9087854+aa-turner@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Sep 2023 13:00:41 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 1/3] 709

- Write out 2x in words
- Merge two sentences
- Remove implemenetation detail from What's New
---
 Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst | 9 +++------
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
index 6b4ec99b43dea6..517ad6b95757dc 100644
--- a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
+++ b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
@@ -246,14 +246,11 @@ PEP 709: Comprehension inlining
 
 Dictionary, list, and set comprehensions are now inlined, rather than creating a
 new single-use function object for each execution of the comprehension. This
-speeds up execution of a comprehension by up to 2x.
+speeds up execution of a comprehension by up to two times.
 
-Comprehension iteration variables remain isolated; they don't overwrite a
+Comprehension iteration variables remain isolated and don't overwrite a
 variable of the same name in the outer scope, nor are they visible after the
-comprehension. This isolation is now maintained via stack/locals manipulation,
-not via separate function scope.
-
-Inlining does result in a few visible behavior changes:
+comprehension. Inlining does result in a few visible behavior changes:
 
 * There is no longer a separate frame for the comprehension in tracebacks,
   and tracing/profiling no longer shows the comprehension as a function call.

From b66458f00aa45ed5d901d0730da40a19659d7248 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Turner <9087854+aa-turner@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Sep 2023 13:08:30 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 2/3] 709: Standardise contribution parentheses

---
 Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
index 517ad6b95757dc..0a074b03063f2b 100644
--- a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
+++ b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ comprehension. Inlining does result in a few visible behavior changes:
   create a list of keys to iterate over: ``keys = list(locals()); [k for k in
   keys]``.
 
-Contributed by Carl Meyer and Vladimir Matveev in :pep:`709`.
+(Contributed by Carl Meyer and Vladimir Matveev in :pep:`709`.)
 
 .. _whatsnew312-pep688:
 

From c19e271f1d6c51cddb1863c23eb112a0114b0595 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Adam Turner <9087854+aa-turner@users.noreply.github.com>
Date: Fri, 8 Sep 2023 13:13:39 +0100
Subject: [PATCH 3/3] 709: Add link to PEP

---
 Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst | 1 +
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+)

diff --git a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
index 0a074b03063f2b..9caf9c18856503 100644
--- a/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
+++ b/Doc/whatsnew/3.12.rst
@@ -247,6 +247,7 @@ PEP 709: Comprehension inlining
 Dictionary, list, and set comprehensions are now inlined, rather than creating a
 new single-use function object for each execution of the comprehension. This
 speeds up execution of a comprehension by up to two times.
+See :pep:`709` for further details.
 
 Comprehension iteration variables remain isolated and don't overwrite a
 variable of the same name in the outer scope, nor are they visible after the